Open Poetry #26 |
Second in your Heart |
the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I feel like I am Second in your heart Because the day before I can't get online For a couple days You decide to spend time apart Everytime this happens You decide to play games With friends And I feel like I have been Ditched for the day I keep telling you How bad this makes me feel But you let it go in one ear And out the other It is like I am not worth Being listened to But I guess I have to get used to it Or learn to Ignore my feelings I feel like I am Second place in your heart I guess that is All I shall be. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
How many times we question where we stand.. And yet, when we listen to the churning in our own hearts, we realize the gift as we were intended to always be. TD |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Hard to imagine.....guy must be an idiot... You have a knack for being flatly honest without losing the flow of the lyric, or diminishing the drama in your presentation. I like that very much. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi Julie It's good to see you. I haven't seen you very much lately. Hope all is well. This poem is sad, though it's written well. Heart Hugs to you, Ethel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Julie, I hope all is alright with your sweetheart, dearest friend, I hope he is listening to you as I wish for your heart to be played by ear, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
You'll always be first in my heart Julie. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
bittersweet write |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
wow...bluntly honest! great job how is the internet situation going?? Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I sure hope things improve for you soon!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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