Open Poetry #26 |
Shine |
Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Morning spreads it's fingers 'round the circle of our world Like a blanket, wrapped in hope at each new dawn A new day with it's chances and adventures lay in wait And the shadows left from darkness Now are gone... The promise of today has softened Trials of yesterday Tomorrow is a gift for us to seek This day is yours to weave into the tapestry of life And just like you, it's bounties are unique... So, open up your morning windows Watch the day unfold And welcome every moment yet to come Your destiny is waiting in a world of your design A new day dawns, so put it on, and go Shine like the sun! Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Gorgeous picture and WONDERFUL poem! I enjoyed this deeply .... you are so right, everyday offers new possibilities, may we be ready to make our choices! You shine! I'll try to shine through this day on the wave of this beautiful poem ... Love, Margherita |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Sunnyone, Love the last line as I do the entire poem. Very uplifting. Enjoyed, Hugs Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Margherita!! Oh, I'm so glad that you liked this one, as the dawn caught my eye this morning, and this is the result. I wish you a special day today, and lots of sunshine coming your way!! (and thank you!) |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Pat, and thank you so much!! Even if you live in an overcast place, like mine is this morning, you can still put some brightness into your world, eh?? Nice seeing you here! Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunnyone Good thoughts, good write, good read, enjoyed. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
G'morning Sun-Sis...so true, so true... shine on! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dear Sunnyone, you and your radiant poem, both shine like the sun. Glorious writing! May the sun always shine down upon you and keep your solar panels charged! Love & Hugs, Linda [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (04-24-2003 09:02 AM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunny - an uplifting write this morning, a pleasure to read... BC |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is beautiful!! The sun is shining here, the birds are chirping...flowers are blooming...ain't life grand?!! hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
Your destiny is waiting in a world of your design ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Gosh, I love this!!! especially that line above :-) Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Wonderful words of hope for a fresh faced new day, thank you for posting. Regards, Olias |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
don't see you around much but when I do you never cease to amaze me! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Sy!! Always a pleasure to receive your thoughts in reply...thank you, dear friend! Hi Sun-sis, and you already know how to shine! You brighten up our days here and make us all smile! Thank you! Hi Linda, and yes...I love the solar energy! Guess in the light of the sun has always been my favorite place to dance! Thank you my friend!! Hi Bill, and I hope your morning has been glorious where you are!! Thank you!! Hi Chris, and yes it is!! All we have really is today, so why not enjoy it I say! Thank you!! Hi KristieSue, and it's true..we can design our world any way we choose!! Thank you for your visit too! Hi Olias, and posting here is always a privilege, and a great pleasure...thank you my friend!! Hi Brad, and it's so good to see you too! You're right...I have a lot on my plate at the moment, but this is my favorite place full of my favorite people!! Thank you, and I hope to see more of you too!! Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
Morning spreads it's fingers 'round the circle of our world what a wonderful way to start each day, the words and pic show n tell a fabulous write "one needs not challenge all the players to win the game" |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi QjQ, and glad that you enjoyed this piece! If every day started this way, it would be a perfect world...but at least we can try for it on a personal level...one morning at a time!! Thank you, my friend! Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
I believe that this was indeed an awesome piece of writing. Yep. Definitely!! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this made a smile shine on my face too as all your wonderful encouraging words do! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sunnyone, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton And that's the most wonderful thing about creating. It will always be a mystery. |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Sunny Great words of encourgement. You Go Girl! Thank you for sharing. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The one and only......Sunnyone! The morning holds such promise when we leave the window open, as if to say, it's yours for the taking if you want to let it in! Love this shine of yours~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Albert, and thank you so much!!! It's always nice to have good friends visit in reply and it makes my day!!! Hi Noah!! You are just the one of the nicest poets I've met here at Passions, and it's always a pleasure to write back and forth, and thank you for your always lovely replies! Hi Ariana, and I know the sun is shining where you are!!! Get out there, and lay on the beach for me, ok?? Thank you, girl!! Hi BluesSerenade!! So good to see your windows open this morning, letting in the new day and the sunshine!! Thank you for the words, my good friend, and have a great day! Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Sunny: if I shine half as much as you do I will be one lucky soul This is beautiful inspiration xxoo |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
As substantial as the Beatles "Good Day Sunshine"...James |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
Morning spreads it's fingers 'round the circle of our world Like a blanket, wrapped in hope at each new dawn A new day with it's chances and adventures lay in wait And the shadows left from darkness Now are gone... WONDERFUL !!!!! i adore this poem. i think i would like to see this poem every day, first thing when i awake, just to remind me how beautiful life can be. thanks hugs from june x hugs from june x |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
one of your best enjoyed |
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