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My Angel
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My Angel |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia 
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I call out your name in my dream Your face close becomes You kiss upon my lips Together one moment we are one Time stops still The bliss me overcomes Your soul entangles mine Connecting as whole once half Before this now moment I fell Into your big brown eyes Your love surrounded me Your sweetness engulfed my all I gave you my heart Belong to you it will never part Your my angel overlooking my life I have felt you always forever Since the day I was born You guided me to you Now together for always Time shall pass You and me beat one heart |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
You and me beat one heart love that line.. enjoyed whiskey  Maree. |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Thankyou for your replys I enjoy reading all the lovely poems from so talented poets on this forum. Julie |
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MikeFessel Member
since 2003-04-19
Posts 321Brooklyn, NYC, USA |
Oh! I posted a poem with the same name, and I clicked this thinking it was mine. What a pleasant surprise! Ahh, this is much better than my own poem. Such a happy, loving piece I thoroughly enjoyed this! Hope I bump into your work again!Mike |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Uniquely and beautifully said... |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
I like this very much. The words switched around make it fun to read, too.Kielo I know only one thing, and that thing is that I know nothing. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
The bliss me overcomes Your soul entangles mine wow what lines, a absolute write!! "one needs not challenge all the players to win the game" |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Julie, this is beautiful, sweet friend, and may your angel always guide your heart with loving care and light! (kiss on cheek) This is mesmerizing, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Mary Ann Member
since 2003-04-23
Posts 111 |
I like this poem a lot The interplay of words throughout was great..very beautiful work... God bless, Mary Ann |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked this |
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