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QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

0 posted 2003-04-24 03:15 AM

fences & gates

Building love to stayand not to stray.

first you will need to build a fence, to
hold in common sense,

then be very congenial and conscientious,
using a gate to communicate.

then having compassion for others you close
the gate on those not compatible,

and wait for the right one to find the key to
open the gate

to the common sense behind the fence.

"one needs not challenge all the players to win the game"

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

1 posted 2003-04-24 11:06 AM

I like this.....it's like the thing about putting up barriers or walls to keep the wrong ones away!!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2003-04-24 12:00 PM

Q:

wait for the right one to find the key to
open the gate

to the common sense behind the fence.

exactly - the one who will "see" you
nice write
xxoo

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

3 posted 2003-04-24 01:08 PM

Fantastic!!!! Love the way the thoughts unfold and weave themselves back together in the ending!! Great job and a much enjoyable read, too!

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-04-24 01:21 PM

and wait for the right one to find the key to
open the gate

to the common sense behind the fence.

Q, I really like these thoughts behind
your poem. I have finally found the
"right one", I do believe....well, we
kind of found each other. We were best
friends before we fell in love.

Hugs,
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (04-24-2003 01:23 PM).]

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

5 posted 2003-04-24 01:25 PM

thanks everyone for your nice comments!!!!

Thomas119gold
Senior Member

since 2002-06-03

Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

6 posted 2003-04-24 01:39 PM

Thumbs up on this one

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