Open Poetry #26 |
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Solitude (Acrostic) |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
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![]() Silence in the presence of self One human being, being human Listen to the thunder of a whisper Isolation now a blanket of security Thoughts of jumble, simply erased Uninterrupted pleasure abounds Daydreams couple and mulitply Embracing oneness blessed ~ . . Chris Barker April 2003 ~~~~~ |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
How beautiful is this? More than mere words can say... but understanding that solitude can be art, when touched deftly by those who know. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Chris, this is magnificent. Understanding solitude is not an easy thing, but once it is mastered, it is pure joy. Hugs, Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Softly serene dear sister...lovely thoughts here. Beautiful Acrostic...very nicely done. ~Tight hugs on a chilly day..miss you, Love Teed~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
![]() Oh, Chris, I wish I could do these. These is beautiful. I love the picture and the words. ![]() Hugs, Ethel Psssttt...I love your new picture, too. You have a beautiful smile just like your beautiful heart, friend. ![]() |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
nicely written "acrostic" |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
![]() Your comments are so sweet!! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I am so happy I found this .... You have captured the priceless value of solitude masterfully. Very very beautiful! Hugs. Margherita |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou Margherita for your welcome comments. ![]() |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
This is one of the most powerful, and beautiful acrostics I have ever read. ThisDiamond |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
My goodness ThisDiamond, thankyou!! ![]() "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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paladin![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
They say the best test of character is how well you get along with your self when no one is around. paladin |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Chris - you understand solitude well. Great write from a great pen, and may I say a softer heart... BC |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Well done Chris. We need happy...alone first. No? |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Chris... quiet and respectful of the beauty inside when no one is looking. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
There are moments that are good to be lost .... this is one of them. Excellent write, Chris. ( ![]() |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
paladin - yes, dear sir, you are correct on that point. Thankyou. ![]() Bill - you are too sweet! thanks. ![]() Richard - I believe it was one of my favourite speakers and authors, Iyanla VanZant who taught, "never say...I had to accomplish this all by myself....rather I accomplished this "with" myself." Thankyou kind poet. ![]() Martie - your words are beautiful. Thankyou!! ctowen - I am blushing...thankyou ![]() |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) Oh Chris, I love solitude too, well, except I can always use some birds chirping and twittering with joy! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I always love your wonderful contagious smile poems, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chris, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton And that's the most wonderful thing about creating. It will always be a mystery. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Chris this is beautiful. Solitude can be a wonderful thing. As Richard said, we need to be one with ourselves....so very true. Loved this Chris...I'm keeping it. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
PERFECT P erfecting the connection with higher self E xcellence in writing and thought R elationship with the Powers That Be F riendship with one's own self E nduring C entering T ranquility Lovin' hugs, Linda |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Wonderful writing and yes it is a beautiful thing unless one stays to long in isolation and the security blanket becomes dependance and one falls inot darkness..or so I've heard |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Noah, yes, solitude does need the music of nature. Thanks sweetie. ![]() Donna, how nice of you - thankyou! ![]() Linda, ah..a lovely Acrostic of your own. ![]() Aenimal, I agree....solitude is not an "always" thing. But once in awhile....Mmmm..it is divine! ty ![]() |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Nothing can improve thoughts from the heart, except perhaps their artful presentation. Nicely done!! KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou so much KayJay!! ![]() "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
This is so wonderful that I've read it several times and waited for days to reply just so I could bump it to the top again. Don't want anyone to miss seeing it. This is a great reminder to enjoy solitude and not misuse it. Shenachie |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Bridget - Oh, how kind of you. This puts a smile on my face to-day. Thankyou! hugs, ![]() "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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