Open Poetry #26 |
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God's Jewel |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
God’s Jewel Godlike, his child Close to emergence And then back inside again Like a piece of glass Close to the surface Tearing away at the skin All of his dreams And awakenings There is no silence here Muddled mind, random thoughts Sensitivity’s fog Yet the power to see what is real The waves surround, but He’s steady and strong From all that creation holds Subduing the anguish of his soul With the power and glory Of love He’s been afraid I understand Too much to clarify He already knew Now I believe, too No need to justify The moon and the stars tell his story The truth pulls away at the veils His peace and his love Build the trust in my heart For with God’s child Love never fails [This message has been edited by Kahlil (04-22-2003 08:28 PM).] |
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JaiOfHeaven Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 207California, Usa |
The moon and stars tell his story..as well as the sun..the galaxy..the earth..the sky..the grass.. the oceans and seas...the animals....us. His love never fails..your writing is truth and I thank you for writing it. Touched me..truly it did. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
thank you |
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Black Swan Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 165on the moon |
Kahlil! stunning as usual! vivid imagery is the name of your game, I always enjoy discovering what pictures your words will draw in my mind ~Talia |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kahlil, a wonderful birth of poetry... Thank you for this ![]() |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"The moon and the stars tell his story The truth pulls away at the veils Peace and love I welcome into my heart For with God’s child Love never fails" Beautiful...pure poetry!!! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Oh my, this is beautiful.... Enjoyed greatly, Pat ![]() ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Absolutely beautiful Kahlil. "What is life without the radiance of love?" Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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