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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Revelation I sit within a shadows gray And wonder on the light of day To see if I can find a path Perhaps a way to take a bath To scrub my body free of dust And let my mind indulge in trust To melt the fear away from me And stop this travels odyssey For mist impales my every dawn And answers disappear each morn Night is full of fancy whimsy Never stays it is to flimsy And so I follow fantasy Sip its cup for ecstasy But argosy’s come to port With cargos of despair and thwart So day still turns to shadows gray And night will not reveal the way. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
My moon was held in shadowed mist and still I felt the breath in this, a write, a sight, a way to view thoughts encumbered, in the blue... but know I well, from days gone by... whatever you write? I sit, with Sy... Good morning, sweet man!  |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Great thoughts to ponder here, and I agree that it's much nicer to drink from fantasy's cup...(which can be done while soaking in a tub full of bubbles!!!!) Loved this, Sy!! Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
I love the way this unfolds. Just beautiful. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Faith and fear. They say if you have faith you can't have fear. Ha! I sure can, at the same time, too! Grins. Enjoyed this. Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Sy! Is it okay if you have tea in fantasy's cup today? Good..just brewed a pot..my sister will be along soon with the eats. How I enjoy your morning pearls of wisdom. ~Morning Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Keep sipping fantasy Sy...it will show you the way.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Goood mooorning, Mr. T. ! If you cannot find your way in the light of day, may I suggest lucid dreaming in the dark of night? Warm morning hugs, EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine If I were a morman I'd take you home.  Sunnyone Tub of bubbles sounds good, LOL Patricia Thanks for the beautiful. Pat, Two grins back, LOL Nancy, What would I do without you and your sister, scorpio Well it does make me a little woozy some times, LOL Earth Angel Will I find you there? LOL |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
And so I follow fantasy Sip its cup for ecstasy But argosy’s come to port With cargos of despair and thwart sigh...you too, eh?  (and I thought you'd sworn off the stuff!)  Mornin' hugs with a sigh, for sy... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, LOL can't seem to break the habit. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Seymour - don't worry, if night will not reveal the way...I will leave a light in the window for you. Wonderful write again this morning. Cherry tarts with our tea? Yum Yum. hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
To scrub my body free of dust And let my mind indulge in trust To melt the fear away from me And stop this travels odyssey Exactly! You nailed it -- caught the feeling, that to be ready we first have to cleanse the distrust from ourselves, open our pores to it.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, Cherry tarts my favourite, thank you sweet, Ratleader Thank you I knew you would understand. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy...If only night would tell the day, the way.  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
To scrub my body free of dust And let my mind indulge in trust To melt the fear away from me If only. *S* I'd sleep my life away if night revealed all the answers... but then, I'd miss your poems! *S* Beautiful, contemplative write! *S* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
as always, a definite thinker...and keeper! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern That's true, passing shadows THank you sweet, |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Revel not in dreary dread of dark's duress ... find thine's impress in midnight's caress. 'Tis upon sparking stars comes this promised wish ... born on beam of moon, dreams come true on silver kiss. Embrace eventide's ebon' dusking desire ... comes the night ... comes the instill of inspire. When the dark gives way to morn's dance of day ... comes the sun's second chance in dawning display. Find thy delight in midnight's invite of infinite insight ... inspiration's ignite will excite in poetic revelation's recite. ~~~~~ (thats my fancy way of saying dont be scared of the dark ... its just the night mooning your muse LOL*ww*  Ocean wrapped around the sun |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Seymour - another well done write from your talented pen... BC |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sy~ Smiling here...because I always do after reading you. Loving this one, my poetic friend. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, You have lit a light of nights bizzare And strummed then on a hot guitar I'd dance your dance of fantasy If it were just an argosy. But it goes beyond a dance of whim To me it is more a hymn. WWRS Bill, Thank you my friend. vlraynes Your enjoy is all I ask, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) I think when you scratch the surface of every shade of gray there is some luster deep inside the raw material that is more intriguing every examination! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
SY: And so I follow fantasy Sip its cup for ecstasy awesome write - I do know that feeling of basking in the moonglow myself too often xxoo |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hello, Seymour.  It makes me so happy to see your smiling face on here. I know that I'm in for another really good poem of wisdom from your masterful pen. Hugs,  Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (04-15-2003 01:37 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, I think your right. littlewing Sweet reply, thank you. Ethel, Thank you dear, I try to please. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
If only one could..... Sy I love your style!!!! Enjoyed!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bridgette, Thank you dear you are sweet. |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
A very moving piece. I wish you a rich supply of your cup of fantasy ... yummy, good to the last drop! Enjoyed. |
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