»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #26
»
Just Look
| Open Poetry #26 |
|
Just Look |
|
|
Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
The sun loves the earth in distance. The wind...in the nearness of its touch. The moon makes oceans dance. And rain is the total falling of our tears. There is no absence to our love - Just look. |
||
| © Copyright 2003 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved | |||
garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
How true, Eric. When someone truly loves another, the love shows through all things. Doesn't it? Hey, that sounds like another good poem!! Isn't it something how we here at PIP bring so much inspiration to each other? Thank you for your loving and compassionate words, friend. You are a true romantic. Hugs,  Ethel |
||
|
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I am such a hopeless romantic.. How could I not love your writing?! Lovely indeed....much enjoyed. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
||
|
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Look... and look again... Libraried. |
||
|
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
May we all see and appreciate these divine gifts. Simply beautiful writing, Eric. Absolutely lovely... Love & Eteral Light, Linda |
||
|
Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I am looking and I see a world of love through your beautiful words. Eric you are THE Poet of Love! Love, Margherita  |
||
|
Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
I agree with Margherita. I love - love through your eyes. And just so you know, there will never be absence of my love for your writing. Love, -Patricia |
||
|
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I love the way you simplify the moment of experiencing love. Just look, it IS there. |
||
|
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Eric, this is lovely, sweet friend, all your lovely romantic words make the world come in action and bring a rumba beat that is bound to make your love always feel alive! (big hugggsssssss) Yay, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
||
|
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ericc...It should be easier to just look...so many things get in the way of the clear vision that you have. Lovely poem! |
||
|
Etain Member
since 2003-02-22
Posts 92The moon... |
Sublime words Eric. In every touch of nature love unfolds. Love, Etain. |
||
|
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very nicely said Eric. No question of it.. |
||
|
garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
There is no absence to our love - Just look. Yep, Eric, that's how us hopeless romantics think!!!  Hugs, Ethel |
||
|
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow...that is so romantic! |
||
|
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I'm looking...James |
||
|
littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
just look . . . exactly Eric - just look at what beauty you have given here . . . amazing xxoo |
||
|
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
What a beautiful write. Enjoyed the word play and the frilled chiffon in the breeze feel. Wonderful. TD |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
