screaming dandelions and goddesses

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Open Poetry #26

screaming dandelions and goddesses

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

0 posted 2003-04-21 08:37 PM

song of spring
time to sing,

she wants to trample
through pristine green,

pawns of lawns
manicured,

dandelions dots

weeds come screaming
thru the rocks,

graffiti on the
subway door,

next stop, brooklyn
hoyt and schermerhorn,

where homeless
sleep the winter's dawn,

silent shadows
croping up,

reminders, blinders
cannot stop,
unpretty truths
come gritty and grey

heads in the sand
but injustice weighs,

look at her
shouting
she's so vane, insane

wants to fly
like a goddess
but truth comes with rain,

in threats to strip her long blonde mane

her fear to be normal
ordinary andplain

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

1 posted 2003-04-22 01:27 AM

Interesting post.
"Look at her
shouting
she's so vane, insane"
Maybe 'vain' is what you need here.

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

2 posted 2003-04-28 02:42 PM

You paint terrific pictures here.....An interesting write. I do hope to read more!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

3 posted 2003-04-28 09:28 PM

Thanks so much for the replies and encouragement. And I am vane,,,,,insane,,,,inane,,,,,but not profane!

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