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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA 
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I feel so different inside, Nothing is left not even pride. Where am I, In this sea of tears I cry. Why, why, why do I feel this way, My mind tells me not to stay. Life is not worth living in this hell, For this my tears have a story to tell. They say to end it now, Now and forever. My eyes they are dry, But yet I still cry. I cry inside hard and long, My body is sore, My mind is gone, As I drown in my tears on the floor. Why, why, why do I feel this way, My mind tells me not to stay. Life is not worth living in this hell, For this my tears have a story to tell. They say to end it now, Now and forever. I begin to see the white light, Do I stay or let myself die, My body tells me to fight, But my mind asks why. Why, why, why do I feel this way, My mind tells me not to stay. Life is not worth living in this hell, For this my tears have a story to tell. They say to end it now, Now and forever. Why, why, why do I feel this way, My mind tells me not to stay. Life is not worth living in this hell, For this my tears have a story to tell. They say to end it now, Now and forever. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Most poets understand the kind of pain I feel pouring out of this poem. My heart goes out to you.....I have lived a very painful life and there is one thing I have learned...all the pain I have endured has shaped me into the person I am...I am today at the age of 47 greatful for it all. Please know that people feel for you...take care and try to find a ray of love and hope in your life....if nothing else know that you have a gift with words that is very rare. **hugs** |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
I enjoyed reading your write! >>QjQ<< looking forward to reading more! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
voices sometimes tell you to leave, but not forever, just to move on. Sometimes we need to listen to those voices, so we DON'T die. Sounds like you need a change...go get it! |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Thank you everyone for sharing your thoughts. I hope to write more poerty to share with you. *Kelly* |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
My younger brother would love your penname. Anywayz, This is very sad. And I think most poets can relate to this pain. Good write!!! Hope to read more..... Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
i feel your pain. expressed really well. i enjoyed reading this. hugs to you hon, june x |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Thank you Bridgette and June I'm glad you liked it. I hope to write many more poems. ~Kelly~ |
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