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Love and flowers |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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Stay with me a little while walk me through this tangled forest of thought into open glade where your beauty mingles with flowers in the sun that I may draw deep within the scent of love pure ____________________________________________________ How's this for changing gears, see I may be cynical and dark but I have dreams too. Mind you in all honesty I don't believe in them anymore so I'll stick to the shadows thank you [This message has been edited by Aenimal (04-21-2003 05:17 PM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Where's TinkerBelle when we need her? I like this side of you - so when you feel feisty and want to show it?  I'll be watching!  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah... dreams and believing in them... tricky.. for all seem to fall short of the ideal and we are left with the bitter sweet all too often and are likely not to know when the dream is met... enjoyed this side of your pen.. and can see should the woman come into your life that makes you fall... you indeed will be a mess to pick the gravel out of. One does not write with as much passion as you do and fall easily... |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks Karilea these moments are few and far between but glad you liked this Cpat when referring to me and specifically someone loving me these lyrics by Fiona Apple come to mind Hunger hurts and I want him so bad oh it kills Cuz I know I’m a mess he don’t wanna clean up I got to fold cuz these hands are too shaky to hold -Hunger hurts, but starving works, when it costs too much to love ya know..except its She instead of He in my case |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Raffaele nice to discover your romantic dream, I just see you walking hand in hand with your love ..... DO believe! Dreams do help us to survive! ..... and sometimes, often, quite often they come true! Amore e fiori! Il profumo ti fa girare la testa! Abbracci. Margherita |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oooh, I like this side of you. The other side isn't so bad either...lol. Your writing is quite intriguing. Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
very cool! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
listen: Rise up my dark star...face into the night, Come out of your corner..shine for the night . . . You know the rest . . . This is beautiful . . . may your midnight moon meet the sunlight . . . I love this xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (04-21-2003 07:41 PM).] |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Aenimal...When love happens, it changes everything and feels much like this poem. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
margherita as soon as just one of them comes through I'll start believing you have my word Thanks Chris I'm multi-faceted like frosted Mini Wheats Thanks Brad appreciate it Thanks vandana I know the song it's the feeling that's lost Marite thanks my faith is shaken what can i say |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
figures i missed this the first time around.......seeing your ballads......... bless you, child....... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Raph, I missed this the first time around, too. I love to read your dreams that you write about. And.....dreams really do become reality sometimes.  hugs  Ethel |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
well now, I think you do the mushy stuff real nice  this is beautiful |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Raph, perhaps if you thought and wrote like this more often, you would draw this type of energy towards you! Just a thought! I do enjoy your dark writing as well but I'm a firm believer in our drawing to one's self that which we project. You are a very versatile and creative writer!  Huggums, Linda |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You sure are like a diamond! Loved a peak at this facet. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
I love mini wheats so which side are you the frosted ohh umm sorry my mind was wondering there...and response to your poem...ohIf at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
thanks to inkedgoddess for bringing this back around and to Earth Angel for finding its energy. This write is as strongly positive as his others which are questioning, if not damn dismal at times, which we love to experience. :-) |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hey Sir Raph, I agree with Martie. It is beautiful as is your poem. Maree. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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