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Hip Death in the Key of G
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Hip Death in the Key of G |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia 
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I wish sweet young thing to bask in your harsh ignorant sun writing rambling incarnate rhythmic vibrations late into the night or was it morning when I first lusted after listlessness from a distance twenty miles hence since remembered in a park in a small city existing only in my little piece of cranial matter from day to day I spit laughter in the direction of the dawning of hell since the saints are on strike the world has gone to the dogs or at least African frogs I say or at least mutter under muted breath to myself on a cool autumn eve under duress of self psychosis wither I come or go I do sit at least four times a day drinking carbonated beverages as if elixers from Apollo himself See things do I? I have seen many things yet remember few and care about none for I am but a god a diluted lunatic lost in festering stupidity since I lost my Id in search of Freudian salvation I do wander and wane from time to time hunger calls so I bid adieu or at least good bye and all frivolous archaic expressions of manners Farewell to the key of G [This message has been edited by Brad Majors (06-03-2003 12:10 PM).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"See things do I? I have seen many things yet remember few and care about none for I am but a god a diluted lunatic lost in festering stupidity since I lost my Id in search of Freudian salvation" what a cool write  |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
why thank you! |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Excellent flow of words and beautifuly told. Thanks, Eric |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
cool write BM |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow...I usually have no words for your writings, but I still want you to know I'm here and I'm in awe |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Thank you |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Brad : this is exquisite: I lost my Id in search of Freudian salvation LMAO - can I print this out and hand it in as my weekly therapy journal . . . pleaaassseeee |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"the world has gone to the dogs or at least African frogs I say" Now THERE is an image! Bravo! |
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Kellsue Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 210Waukesha, WI USA |
Excellent! Kelly You can give without loving but you cannot love without giving |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Excellent craftsmanship here. The mood conveyed perfectly... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Brad - your words used in this are come together as one. Great write... BC |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
thank you |
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