Open Poetry #26 |
Like Now |
Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
To truly love me...could you let me go? Could I be as water cupped as a moment in your hand? Could I pass as the wind...close against your cheek - Whispering secrets to your night? Would you let me go? Would the moment...tender in its brief expression last a lifetime? Would our secret be enough? Sometimes there are questions that require no answers. Sometimes the answers leave us wanting. And sometimes we ask...just for the poetry. Like now. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
just for the poetry... but isn't it all in the poetry? so are we asking for it all? Nicely done... I enjoyed. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
All of this but only more if you continue to share just as you do... Thank you Eric... it is a true delight to read you. |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Sometimes now is good enough... well done. Sunkissed. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sometimes this is all we need...like now. Beautiful! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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luvlorn322 Junior Member
since 2002-10-28
Posts 43 |
sometimes asking like this, is all that keeps us sane..thanks for sharing |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
And I, my dear, let him go because I truly loved him. In despair, I felt the water cupped in my hands trickle through my fingers slowly and painfully as he escaped me. But through poetry, my answers are often found before I even know the questions. Like now. -Patricia |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
True love is a gift from Heaven I think .... so, even only a moment COULD be enough to remember the future expanding into eternity, a secret to share while life demands its sacrifices ... A beautiful poem Eric, made of stirring questions... to answer or to enjoy ... like Now. Love, Margherita |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
just like now . . . Eric - such beauty in your soul This is lovely . . . xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
dang, this is good |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Not the first time my eyes have been here... Unless the caged bird enjoys it's clipped wings... if it doesn't sing let it go. Your poetry is timeless, Ericc.... we come back to read again, and again... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Eric, I am so happy I found this, I was busy during the time this was posted and fortunate not to have missed this! (big hugggsssssss) Questions are sometimes best left unanswered, there is no lie to that as long as the eyes tear and the smile glistens, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
I think present day 'love' leaves a whole lot of us wanting to ask more questions..never mind the answers...enjoyed this! |
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