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QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

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U.S.A.

0 posted 2003-04-20 06:07 PM

City sidewalks, country trails, park paths.
sunrises, high noon, sunsets. moon rising,
moon beams stars twinkling. calm days,
blustery days, rainy days, rainy nights and
snowy days with snowy nights.

I will walk the sidewalks, hike the trails, stroll
the winding paths, from the rising sun to the
setting sun, at nighttime the moon beams will show
me the way, in darkness the north star shall be my
guide, calm days I will strolling, blustery days will
find me bustling along. through rain and snow I will
trudge my way to find the love my heart belongs to.

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

1 posted 2003-04-20 06:20 PM

QjQ

It does seem we do all that. And then you hear these stories of those who stopped looking and as if by magic, he (she) shows up, unexpectantly, and they live happily ever after, for a few years anyways, in this day and age...

I like the sentiment in this.

If I may ask, I am curious why you don't line break when writing your poetry? Just wondering...

Enjoyed, Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

2 posted 2003-04-20 06:30 PM

about line breaking? i don't what that is?

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

3 posted 2003-04-20 09:51 PM

Q, we have a place for lessons, if you wish...see the Poetry Workshop - but each individual to his own, yes? Sometimes line breaks work - sometimes, we have to put ourselves into the poet's shoes....

We have many forums for our enjoyment - if you need any help locating them...you know where to reach me...

DonFurr
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since 2001-01-01

Posts 172
Monticello IN

4 posted 2003-04-20 10:01 PM

Don't worry about the details
that you know nothing about
Just keep writing with feeling
and your art will shout

Bind me sole and Soul to the One
Together to pour Love into the world
until tears of joy fall like rain

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

5 posted 2003-04-20 10:09 PM

thanks for all your ideas, i will check into some of them,

carol
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since 2003-01-25

Posts 624
Florida USA

6 posted 2003-04-20 11:26 PM

very good poetry you write with a lot of feelings

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

7 posted 2003-04-21 01:20 PM

A lot of deep heartfelt feelings....It's almost as if you echo the heart of someone I know!!! Wonderful writing!!! This one especially reminds me of home!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2003-04-21 01:25 PM

Wonderful write Q!
Much enjoyed the read.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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