Open Poetry #26 |
Midnite Tide |
QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
I missed the boat, and placed a bottle afloat with a message in it for you, the winds and currents carried it far and wide in hopes of finding you, I know your lonely, walking the shores with out me, by your side, as we used to do at the midnight tide, I remember the moon beams shining in your eyes as they sparkled like stars above, I gaze at a star each night and a wish that you will find the bottle with my message to you, [This message has been edited by QjQ (04-18-2003 10:17 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This has such a wonderful ebb and flow. Welcome to Passions. I am sure I'll be seeking more from your pen. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
maybe you haven't missed the boat after all |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
QjQ~ Isn't this lovely ? YES, it is ! Welcome to our ever-growing circle of poets and friends~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I walk the shore and look for messages in bottles...none yet, but some day. [This message has been edited by passing shadows (04-19-2003 02:13 PM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I found a Suntory Whiskey bottle floating on the North Shore...probably from a Japanese fishing boat...no message...still a few shots of something in the bottle...James |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Oh man....This is sooo good!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Very nice indeed. |
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