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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack 
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Today I will make an effort... To show you my heart Loving you openly... freely To make you smile To make you laugh Today I will share the sunshine Bathing in the spring air And enjoying the beauty of you Renewing promises... Promises from God My commitment to you And promises to myself Today is our day a gift That I will always treasure And I am honored to share it with you . . . all that we see is but a dream within a dream . . . [This message has been edited by dreambuilder (04-20-2003 07:28 PM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
A very touching write, |
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life Junior Member
since 2003-04-14
Posts 36India |
beautiful.... loved it nicely expressed thoughts luvs life |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Happy the one for whom this was written....well done, well done. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
..yes, making an effort...that's important, so important in any relationship. I relate to your poem,thanks. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Beautiful words dream |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is a beautiful statement of love...so beautiful...I know that she enjoyed it.  Hugs, Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful! |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
QJQ - thank you - I'm glad you enjoyed it Life - thank you for the kind words Ratleader - lol - yes she was thank you Kahlil - it's funny - she said "I Love it - people will relate to this you should post it" thank you Aenimal - a rare write for me as I ussually write a lil darker or deeper - but I was inspired - thank you for the compliment Ethel - well, with the reaction I got - I just might write like this more often - lol passing shadows - thank you for reading & the compliment |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
dream: what a truly lucky lady to be graced with such devotion . . . I am sure she is shining . . . This IS beautiful xxoo |
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