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MikeFessel
Member

since 2003-04-19

Posts 321
Brooklyn, NYC, USA

0 posted 2003-06-11 02:57 PM

Breathe freely
my tempests flame.
Absorb my demonic soul.
Wrathful emissions canker,
propelling my being
deeply inside your own.

Bleed desolate tears.
From your skin erupt
jets of liquid flame,
as boiling veins burst
screaming foul murder
upon your conscious form.

Stare on, writhe in horror
while I caress my creation.
Tormented fusion of form
wretching in hideous acticipation.
Repelled you try to escape
you have long lost control,
locked inside from within,
my visage becomes your own.

Eyes clamped tight in terror,
I shall not let you hide.
Feel the demons swarm and swirl
clawing, tearing inside your mind.
Embrace the crushing insanity
that forever envelopes my kind.

Suddenly I release.
This vision is no more.
As my spirit fades away
I leave you shaken and alone.
Mocking laughter echoes on,
leaving you to wonder
did I leave you clean?
Or will this momentary imprint
forever scar your being?

By Michael J Fessel

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

1 posted 2003-06-11 03:45 PM

Mike, I feel your soul in torment. Your pain is tearing at me. I am here.

Patricia

MikeFessel
Member

since 2003-04-19

Posts 321
Brooklyn, NYC, USA

2 posted 2003-06-11 09:00 PM

Patricia,
I am ok

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-06-12 12:26 PM

made me think, for sure

MikeFessel
Member

since 2003-04-19

Posts 321
Brooklyn, NYC, USA

4 posted 2003-06-12 02:21 PM

Passing Shadows,
Hmmm don't know how to take that, but ok. Thanks? Was that a compliment even? LOL

Mike

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-06-14 05:46 AM

this is a good write...drifting off to think is a good thing

MikeFessel
Member

since 2003-04-19

Posts 321
Brooklyn, NYC, USA

6 posted 2003-06-14 09:10 AM

Passing Shadows,
Oh Ok, thank you Passing Shadows

And thank you even more for the

Mike

[This message has been edited by MikeFessel (06-14-2003 09:11 AM).]

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