Open Poetry #26 |
Whimsy |
Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
I'm on a flight of whimsy, and though it may seem flimsy; the excuse I give is a need to live a life of little frenzy. I hope I don't seem lazy if I stop to smell the daisies. For, I've found, the world goes 'round whether or not I'm busy. So, pardon me please, if I chase the breeze, and act a little crazy! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
definately smell those daisies!! (my fav. flower) this is so great |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Your pardon'd,, go crazy good one A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Smiling at this... So glad you shared your 'flight of whimsy'. ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truly met the poet. ~vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (06-02-2003 12:28 PM).] |
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Poe_Pot_Pie Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 107Canada |
I love it! Fresh! New! Short! Nice ending! |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
SEA- thanks for the read. glad it made you smile! bslicker- thanks for the pardon, it sure beats the "strange looks". vlraynes- thank you. i'm glad you enjoyed it. Poe_Pot_Pie- thanks and BTW...i don't know how to write anything long! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very cool write! |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
Hi Dixie it's good to see you here. thanks for reading! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, loved this bit of whimsy! thanks for the chuckle |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
you're always welcome Kacy! |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
^-^! Do I need to say it? I think you know what I'm going to say... {{Hugs}} I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Isn't fun to just let the words fly free! Warm hugs, EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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