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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Magnified And there I was, chin on hand, with magnified thoughts more or less important, an inflated smile bringing me back to you. So what of it? Who lit that candle again? Why celebrate another year of emotions, webbed between the insanity of words? I have lettered in you, adhering to your imprints, weakening in the black sheerness of fantasy. The mirror mocks me, flames my urges, compels me to distort my realizations, feign my senses into a disciplined pattern. Play me the triangle, a menage a trois, connected, fine tuned, and anchored, turning corners following a path, sequenced by the unvarying you. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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idleeyes86 Member
since 2003-06-09
Posts 64Somewhere over the rainbow |
There's something descreetly sudductive about this which I enjoy. It may just be my lack of experienced in the world of poetry, but I do find it a tad confusing at times, particularly the last verse, however take nothing away its a truly intruiging poem. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I have lettered in you, adhering to your imprints, weakening in the black sheerness of fantasy. So much to be said for this... I could interpret it all kinds of ways! Love your naked thoughts, and the slight edge you give to them. Hugs M~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
In the last verse, I guess it was my way of saying I have 3 personalities on here, all connected, each day turning the corners...same path. *s thank you for reading M |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
You snuck in there Lori. Boy is it humid here today as we await more rain...trying on clothes is no fun, especially when most no longer fit  anyway, you timed it perfectly. M |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, I get it! There's three of you! That just triples our pleasure! I usually have to read your poems two or three times!--and that's a good thing! You make me think!  Have a great day! Warm hugs, EA |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
EA, you brought forth a smile this morning, thank you.  M |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
M- Holy smoke and mirrors, woman. I had to read this gem countless times. Three of you, turning the corners interconnected. There is but one Maureen...couldn't be more than one...so unique and beautiful she is. She brings to the table so many lovely qualities because of her moods and personalities. You are wonderful! Hugs, Patricia |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
just in case you didn't know..I write as Alicethruglass and Lady Ollyne when up to it...depending on my moods thanks and hugs M |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
good write/read... Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
fantastic write M |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thanks Q and Dixie. I was just thinking about being on here...and words...and moods. I know you understand that Dixie *s M |
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