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Sweet denial |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla 
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Id like to introduce myself first,i just joined her yesterday. im 21 years old and im from New Jersey. I hope to make some new freinds on here that enjoy poetry like i do.anyhow here is my latest write. *Sweet Denial* why cant i get a clue, we both know im still not over you,seeing you laugh and smile makes me wish it was like before all the while,.still u toy with me and play like im just some kinda girl to be laid wrap your lies around my heart,tear my mind soul and body apart,invade me once again into your deep darkest of souless feelings. your craziness makes it all apealing. stab the knife deep into me when your done.please make sure you get a towel so the lies don't run |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
OK, so my guess here is we don't like this person, right? *smile* I mean, OK so you still wake up in the night thinking about him but that is your body thinking and not your mind, but other than that minor detail, he's like toast. Did I get that right? HEY! Welcome to PIP. You go ahead and get it on and get it out here! I hope you enjoy this place. Since I joined I have met some of the finest poets I have ever read...and the great part is these people are mostly still alive. *laugh* I liked the raw emotion of your poem, a lot. Thank you for sharing it. |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
omg its like you read my mind.. yes i do wake up in the night and think of him for no reason... thanks for the welcome and nice words  i hope you guys are ready for some serious poetry here coz i write alot. now that i have new freinds i can share it with it makes writting more fun. its a great therapy for me to. if i dident have it,i would go insane! hehe |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggssssssss) I can relate well to this kind of heartaching circumstance, sweet friend, unfortunately sacrifices must be made or we may begin to feel the burn when we're jammed in this emotional toaster, I trust you can do this, this is an excellent debut! Welcome to Passions, sweet Julie, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
your to kind...I'm glad you all like my poetry. as many of you probally aready know the worst critic is yourself. LoL i have to stop being so hard on myself hehe looking forward to seeing more of the wonderful poetry here. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hello Julie  I'm glad to meet you. I'm Ethel....garysgirl. I'm the one that loves to write about me and my Honey-Love. I hope that you like it here amongst this great big family. I look forward to reading more of your poetry. And...  hugs,  Ethel....garysgirl [This message has been edited by garysgirl (06-11-2003 01:42 AM).] |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
im visiting florida right now as a matter of a fact. im visiting my mother i like your poems they are really sweet! hugsFool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
neat write...welcome to Passions! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
WELCOME!if you need a spare towel, just holler here in the passionate blue, we have several friends who keep a closet full, just in case  |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
welcome jersey from a x-jersey  A very nice expression of poetry/read,, i'm looking forward to reading more... Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
From Joisee eh..well welcome to PIP nice intro..go devils..oh yeah they already one |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
Thanks guys,it really makes me feel good that you guys like it. for i am my hardest critic and always think i can write better hehe Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions, Foxie...Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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