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Open Poetry #26

Beholder

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2003-06-11 02:15 AM

Beauty eyes of the beholding
mirrors hold no true image
of self just reenforcement of
body mere flesh not as
enchanting as the soul
dift away to your inner
self and become that
then you wil fine
that you were always
good inside

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-06-11 02:16 AM

good write

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

2 posted 2003-06-11 07:08 PM

Umm...
a few things here. It should be "drift" and find instead of fine..

Just looking for buried treasures here. Enjoyed the message.

You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

3 posted 2003-06-11 07:41 PM

thanks,i knew it was misspelled before,what i posted was a rough draft,but thanks just the same...

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

[This message has been edited by Foxyoasis (06-11-2003 07:42 PM).]

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