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The Ice Cream
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The Ice Cream |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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About that flavor I never tried that stared me in the eye through ice cream laced windows about choices I had to make to make myself competitive... those issues are repetitive distinction on the run exposed for summer fun? Not really....silly. The flavor still lies there continually stares me in the face even when I pick up the pace; of the competition on the block time to shed another frock.. confront new creamy mixtures away from established fixtures. A molt here..another there need exposure to new treats strange flavors lure; new threats...old weapons go unsheathed have I listened to advice?....take heed... They stare me in the face the years slough off... the ice cream scoffs; my underside remains exposed and thin to vengeful stares; when superficial skin is shed... it's the future I sometimes dread. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (06-11-2003 12:53 AM).] |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
very good,i like it! |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
ecrivan, this is a very good poem...very interesting. I enjoyed reading it. Hugs  Ethel |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Ah choices choices so many to make but which are beneficial and which are detriment to us? |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Aenimal... so many choices...so little time  Ethyl, the rivers of my mind flow deep...they always have  |
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