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"gargoyles"
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"gargoyles" |
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gyiel marlok Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 145OHIO |
at the corner of my building,i bet i'm willing to sit motionless..as the still life pretends to be.. something so ridiculous outlooking over the seals... i can see lights... just to clammer over to a freewills sights. it seems impossible,to seep into it's grooves i don't know about the broken tails that throws it off kilter to a lost destination unfiltered at the corners of my buildings... it seems edgeless... i'm willig to throwout..decomposed enemies who shiver at their makers arrival.. the ageless rhino.. whose stampede is heard after... demolishing it's last victor... who's to say i'll lend you my hand... and if you don't take it then so be it.... i've decided to roam alone... whose to say where i'll end up.. whose to care anyhow.. just let me fly... with these gargoyles.... who protect me who would die for me....... |
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gyiel marlok Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 145OHIO |
to those who reply please be frank |
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laurie Member
since 2003-05-28
Posts 153canada, ontario |
hey, tavis. nice work. kinda odd though. good, but... odd. a different style than other stuff l see around here. tell me about it in your next email, will ya? l like.. my favorite line has to be the bit bout the rhino; where did that come from, anyway? lol. laurie. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it is different...unique |
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