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Suddenly and Finally
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Suddenly and Finally |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA 
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Suddenly and Finally Impatience of youth Expressed In daydream doodles… Just the words… Suddenly Finally Written over and over Wanting a break from The school day routines, Bored with sitting in class, The healthiness of youth Clamoring for activity... Not knowing that Life can change too quickly, Be undone in the blink of an eye. Suddenly can mean trauma. Life is fragile And needs to be cherished. Finally With the passing of years I know that life is about loss That grief is the expression of loss And the best way to live Is just to appreciate Who we are What we have And to know That is enough. And more than enough. [This message has been edited by Bridget Shenachie (06-10-2003 11:22 PM).] |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
We all have so much and it too often goes underappreciated. Very wise words, Bridget. I'll keep them in mind.  ~Elizabeth Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Bridget Shenachie, A style I could never attempt done so well. Excellent.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Louise I applaud you and the important message portrayed through your words. Too many of us take things for granted instead of stopping to smell the roses. Life for most people is at such a fast pace and I think we all need to slow down in more ways than one. "Love is the lifeline I cling to when grief threatens to pull me down into eternal darkness" Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nice thoughts and read,,, Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love this! it's a keeper! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Very knowledgeable and oh so true, and I for one have more than I could ever wish for. Nice remember of what is important. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Knowing what brings this about, knowing how sometimes, truth is so hard to write about when it is so personal... makes this more than a  It validates what is between us.  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
It is as though you are speaking directly to the reader--very effective in conveying your message--and in such a gentle, and eloquent manner... Great to read a post of yours, Bridget!  Warm hugs, EA |
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