Open Poetry #26 |
The Poetry In Me..... |
SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
His heart beat in perfect time rise and fall of breath with my every rhyme understanding my intention questioning not- my devotion all the while, softly humming gently.....strumming my life’s melody knowing he was the poetry... in me ~SEA~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(smiling) then he knows indeed how lucky he is... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A worthy dream... indeed. How much you've grown in your writing, SEA... a blessing to us all. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SEA - and the words that you pen from the poetry inside you is excellent... BC |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
---and we are lucky indeed, that you share with us the eloquent poetry that is within you! Warm hugs, Sweet Sea, EA |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I love to read the poetry in you. too. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Might he be a very lucky man and you a very inspired woman. Well said Susan... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely Susan..may he always be the poetry in you. Very softly spoken...much enjoyed. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
SEA....Beautiful, inspire of love, and poem! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Sea...you've out done yourself! Beautiful. jwesley |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh, Sea....I know this, because my Love and I ARE. [This message has been edited by garysgirl (06-06-2003 04:03 PM).] |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Just beautiful. I have been really enjoying your work. Patricia |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Susan, Lucky guy. Life can't get better than that! If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I'm keeping this SEA!! Love it! Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Beautiful and delicate, SEA |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
BRAVO!!!BRAVO!!! What a magnificent way of putting it....Your talent shines in this one SEA... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful writing! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you all very very much....you guys are too nice |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Susan, this is just beautiful, sweet friend, this hums another beautiful poem in itself, the sound of true love, performed by two hearts that relate together in harmony! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Ah, lucky is the man who can be that. You inspire. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
gently.....strumming my life’s melody knowing he was the poetry... in me How very, very beautiful. *S* It's good to read you again, SEA! *S* |
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Selina Member
since 2003-06-07
Posts 62Philadelphia, PA, USA |
This is such a lovely poem.. I really like it |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
a very touching write... I hope he knows how fortunate he is. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Who ever HE is, he is obviously your muse and canvas, to which you create your best work. as ever you write true poetry. i like to do some prose, but mostly my work RYMES, which your work does, well written and thank you... rose. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
And you are his song! Beautiful Sea. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Ah... sheer beauty |
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