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The Goddess Flies (faceless)
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The Goddess Flies (faceless) |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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once upon this page she graced, now vacant her poetic face, they warned her tho; she served her time, her mouth was taped, her hands were tied, she longed to grace the garden tho and sat the fence where ivy grows, encircling itself in vines unable to uproot its soul, she waits her time and writes her lines, and goes into the depths of soul, then frees the voice they couldn't own, now climbs the path where ivy grows, surpassing it she taps the sky, she jumps the fence the goddess flies................................... nice to fly here again and im thankful, i need a face tho eventually [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (06-11-2003 10:35 PM).] |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
i see your face it flows like water across pages of white drawn in word charcoal |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thank you, that's pretty slick  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Look in the mirror....my friend! (kiss on cheek) You are far more fairer than you can imagine, but that beauty comes especially from the inside to the heart of the matter, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michelle, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Michelle, I see your face every time I open one of your poems, even if the actual photo isn't there. Michelle, you really do have a talent for writing that most don't possess. I'm glad that you're back. Hugs  Ethel |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
I'm glad to but then you know that |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I always said, what good is being a goddess if ya can't fly once in awhile? And yes, I echoe the above. Your face is imprinted now. And that's a wonderful thing. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
. . . its nice to have you home . . . I do miss your face though . . . and up there? you are flying . . . xxoo |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
inkedgoddess - now let's see, I remember the first photo, wonder what the second will be like? A preview perhaps... Welcome back here with your poetry, and your warm replies... BC |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I remember just what you look like, pretty lady, but yeah, it would be nice to see you again |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Just be glad your back, don't push the picture issue. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thank you for seeing me fly again, bboy.....you are a needle in the spine, arent u? |
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morefiah Member
since 2003-03-26
Posts 150Spanish Town, Jamaica |
Welcome back. Haven't read your work before but I enjoyed this. Garfield |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, the photo may have disappeared, but the lingering image of what was, hasn't!  Love your style! It's gutsy and real! Luvs 'n hugs, EA |
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JenniX Junior Member
since 2003-06-05
Posts 29 |
Nice poem, although you should try to end the poem better. Otherwise its definitely sweet JenniX |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Lovely writing Michele~ and so meaningful. Your voice carries over quite beautifully in this. I liked how you tapped the sky and found a place all your own. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks again for the feedback blues, yes spoken from expereince, thanks e.angel, u are very sweet |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
needle in the spine...hehehe |
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