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Departed Destination
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Departed Destination |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Departed Destination why do I want so much when so little is understood and damn this tyrant heart for beating when in death even my pen betrays me my words and emotions somehow do not match I find no comfort in change and I do not know what day it is and ache to be touched in the curve |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Things get so confusing at times...well done.  ~Elizabeth Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
feels so unfamiliar, like frazzled, i know ths well |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
I always found the curve was a good place to touch... If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) This is very heartfelt, dearest friend, what's the point if you don't know what time it is, you just have to treat it like a vacation someties as long as the beach umbrella holds up! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
even my pen betrays me my words and emotions somehow do not match Helen, this one really touched me. I can feel the hurt in it. Sometimes our feelings and the way we want to feel, just don't match, do they? Past hurts have a way of creeping in when least expected. Hugs to you, Lady  Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (06-10-2003 09:37 PM).] |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Can i say i wrote this, feels like I did, no this is much better then I could have expressed. Hugs Oh slick one |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
The ache of change I have felt, and you wrote these feelings so well. I felt the confusion, hurt, anger, and fear in this piece, and perhaps it is good to vent that in the curve. In any case this was extremely well done. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
confusion...I know it well |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
*sigh* Understand loved You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Helen: you have just described in perfect form and rhyme and reason - my current state of mind . . . . thank you xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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