Open Poetry #26 |
Midnitesun (haiku) |
Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
picking on you this time Kacy © 1998-2002 Scandinavian charter Yachts Ethereal Peace Bathed in everlasting light Of a Midnight Sun |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Does that make it an all nighter? If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so pretty. Dern I wish Liam would write stuff like this for me. Errrrrrrrrr....... Great write. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
WOW! thanks, you are a sweetie! How beautiful and how thoughtful! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Edder, this is beautiful, sweet friend, Kacy is a wonderful friend and she is a versatile poet who always has the guts to say EXACTLY how she feels, a quality I always most admire in a poet, and you have that quality here too! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Edder, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Edder, with lovely works like this, I'll bet all of our members are wondering who you're going to pick on next! These are excellent! |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
Larry- and a loooong night at that! loner- once again, thank you for your kind words. Kacy- no, thank you! this "name game" has been a good kick for my muse! Noah- thanks ever so much! Karilea- why, thank you! lemme see...who's next? |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
These ARE lovely...and I'm jealous. I never could write a decent haiku. (I dunno when to shut up...) on that note? smile, I'll just say, "gorgeous" and exit, stage right... |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
Serenity- these are right up my alley, as I seem to have a mental block where long poems are concerned. As far as you not knowing when to shut up....just keep doin what you're doin, we'll let ya know! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
hope you don't mind me coming back for another peek, and of course, to give you another big thank you hug. Oh, BTW, there is a big line forming. Get that pen busy! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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