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zillion thoughts in overdrive |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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waiting here for a few million words to flow for thunder to scream and lightning to set alight this modern-day page web-page on a web-site this bulletin board waiting to write in fresh words, unwritten so far of the same thoughts of hurt, angst, pain felt so many times over and over seeking within for newness very deep and then climbing to scale the mountain after having known the depths of the bottom: blocked abracadabra (if that be allowed) unblocked and unlocked though not necessarily in rhyme as the rain falls so do a few words like tear drops feeling lost in the puddle could have done with a cuddle, perhaps when the open gates were rammed through by the bulldozer called Love and left behind uncharitably bruised but then time heals or at least provides an antidote is it only me or do you see the sarcasm in the word antidote as well? well, my world is split into multiple layers hidden beneath a mask though the aim is not to mislead only a desire to spare the world's ears from more stories of miseries and preventing eye-sore no, I am no messiah though ony a little child with a brand new dress (almost) happy glowing in the light after dark the dawn after the night so what if it may be some temporary glee (and the writing of a zillion more meaningless words let it flow let it flow before someone dams the river to prevent an overflow) [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (06-10-2003 04:01 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Very interesting poem but I liked it. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
interesting thoughts expressed,,,, Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
waiting to write in fresh words, unwritten so far of the same thoughts of hurt, angst, pain felt so many times over and over You always achieve that goal. *S* It's good to see you posting again, my friend... especially when you share such treasures with us. *S* |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You have so accurately described a hunger that courses veins of many poets. I know this feeling well. Thanx for sharing it. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I echo Magnus Sudi m'friend. I know this feeling well. Wonderfully writtten as always  Maree. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful write friend! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thanks a million my friends... for coming by and for letting me write what I write... regards sudhir |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
I'm not going to do any damming... Keep the river coming!  “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
but then time heals or at least provides an antidote is it only me or do you see the sarcasm in the word antidote as well? intersting question and thougt provoking for sure......... yes, words, words, words, are there ever enough........sometimes the right ones are just not there though |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Sudhir - smiling at this : please do not let anything get in the way of THIS . . . ans yes an anti-dote for sure felt this one deep xxoo |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
thanking you all so very much... regards, sudhir |
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