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The Awareness Of A Soul Fragment In A Moment's Revelation
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The Awareness Of A Soul Fragment In A Moment's Revelation |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows 
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I have walked on the moon, I have talked to the stars; I am one and one is alone. Blind spotted dog dying of age, deaf in the road, too old to feel the illusion of life through the fog of its years; a burst of awareness, one crystalline thought, illusion and death; to sleep in the stars, to awake in the moon, I am alive alive is alone; there's no afterlife there is afterdeath; I miss the peace and the blind spotted dog. ©2003 by icebox |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is full of truth Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I miss that darn dog too... You stay where you are and write some more! Susan [This message has been edited by Susan Caldwell (06-10-2003 02:56 PM).] |
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crimson tear Member
since 2003-06-07
Posts 76Massachusetts |
Reallly goood it made me think a lot. Death and life are such powerful things and all i can say about your poem is-wow |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I loved your title so much that I read it three times!--and your poem did not disappoint me! Warm hugs, EA |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
the_loner_23 ~ Thank you! I hate to think of the alternative. *grin* Susan Caldwell ~ *laugh* OK, I'll stay for a little while. Thank you for reading this and for your comment. crimson tear ~ You are right; death and life are, well, like, serious. *smile* Thank you for reading my poem and for taking the time to comment. I do appreciate it. Earth Angel ~ Thank you. I am glad the title did not disappoint. I tried several and did not like them at all and went back to the first one. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
the_loner_23 ~ Thank you! I hate to think of the alternative. *grin* Susan Caldwell ~ *laugh* OK, I'll stay for a little while. Thank you for reading this and for your comment. crimson tear ~ You are right; death and life are, well, like, serious. *smile* Thank you for reading my poem and for taking the time to comment. I do appreciate it. Earth Angel ~ Thank you. I am glad the title did not disappoint. I tried several and did not like them at all and went back to the first one. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Brilliant and I sometimes miss the same |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
icebox Just stopped by to say hello and to read more of your thoughts...you are always interesting. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Aenimal ~ Thank you for stopping to read and comment. Martie ~ Thank my friend for your time and effort. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
up up up with this..why? Well..because I love it..and by bumping it..am highly recommending it to everyone.  You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Temptress ~ Thank you for your endorsement.  |
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gyiel marlok Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 145OHIO |
"to sleep in the stars' to awake in the moon" that is just mystery,i love writing like that the unknown |
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