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Open Poetry #26
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RedStoneEB
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since 2003-06-08
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0 posted 2003-06-10 02:00 PM


i tried to write in a new style i hope its ok if its not ill understand
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Hearts thump along to drums
Feelings rush to surfaces
The words, tingle our souls
As feet tip-tap the floor

Beauty moves towards
The kind they die for
A voice asks to dance
The yes looking back

Grasping hands cling tight
Feet move to the beat
Lips press gently
As lovers dance the night

Music drifts away
Still they dance on
To there beat of love


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QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
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1 posted 2003-06-10 02:13 PM


very nice,, i enjoyed the write/read very much...

Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ

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