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I cry out your name / repost from open 7 - requested by Aenimal
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I cry out your name / repost from open 7 - requested by Aenimal |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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In the still of the night you come to me of memories spent and all those feelings rush over me again impetuously moving straight to my brain as I cry out your name ----- my hands, have let go but my heart never will if my words could blanket the skies and fill in every corner and crevice of this earth, again this won't be enough my words of you are never ending they will continue to flow and spill over and over from the depths of my heart Angel of Darkness 9/6/00 |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hey Luscious... I didn't forget this one either. An outstanding work, and I adore this. There's another too, I would love to have for my "collection"--something about green eyes? I don't recall the name, but if you could perhaps repost or just send it my way, I'd be much grateful. and hey...aren't you almost a year older? *eyes twinkle* Seems I recall you get your day ahead of mine?  It is so FINE to read you again! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice... yeah..more than that... ok..so I can't find the right words this morning... so I'll just hush and let the others say them while I nod my head yes. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hey YOU! I've just sent you an email. and aren't YOU almost almost a year older too? hmm it seems I'm a year older before you..now where IS that pout icon Kit had made. *double pout* hmmm I have a few "green eyes" poems...will see what I can do fer you Gorgeous  hugs. Maree  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Cpat, sorry I missed you.. you jumped in whilst I was replying to Karen. Thank you so much and smiling here, nodding yes as well Maree |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
still nodding yes... I thought to write a sonnet take the form and begin with wrap of word and rhyme to explain those things inside which seem denied at normal times the voice of expression or the depth of feel but found instead myself staring at an image held in my mind at arms length for as I have gotten older I need the distance to put things in focus and the sonnet found no form as I remembered yours. |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
"my hands, have let go but my heart never will" Isn't that often how it works? Good poem. I enjoyed reading this. “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Maree: Glad this one was requested - thanks Raph and thank you Maree . . . you pack a punch here Lady . . . xxoo |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Oh, excellent! Perfectly said, and one of those too-few emotions that is the same for all of us, men and women alike. This goes in my library. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I can see why Raph would like to see this, again, and again... thank goodness for those folks who request the very best. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Maree...This is so beautifully expressive of love...You are amazing!  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
my hands, have let go but my heart never will I am so glad for the repost... I felt this one as much as I read it. *S* Excellent!!!! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
my hands, have let go but my heart never will if my words could blanket the skies and fill in every corner and crevice of this earth, again this won't be enough ==================================== I just love when I read a poem and its emotions rise off the page till I feel them. This is a bittersweet beauty Maree...so many emotively impactuous lines and poetically pretty personifications and phrases. Well done girlie..and its good to get to read you. Im still imagining your voice ... |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
my words of you are never ending they will continue to flow and spill over and over from the depths of my heart Maree, my friend, this is absolutely gorgeous.....very, very beautiful.... I'm keepiong it, too, so I can find it to read over and over again.  Hugs Ethel Oh, I like poems about "green-eyes", too, since mine are. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
my hands, have let go but my heart never will God I love that line, love them and thank you so much for reposting. Good thing I went digging and will continue to do so, but in the meantime you better start posting some new ones! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thanks for the repost, Maree... Regards to you, Sudhir |
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Selina Member
since 2003-06-07
Posts 62Philadelphia, PA, USA |
Dark Angel - Very good I really enjoyed reading this poem, it reminds me of a friend of mine. |
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