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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-06-10 05:38 AM

She Was The One

No, in the beginning
I don't think that
he loved her.
He loved being
her lover.
But after awhile
he found it hard
to separate one
from the other.
And if it was
possible for him
to love another,
she was the one.

JamesLee
June09
2003

gemjop
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

1 posted 2003-06-10 06:07 AM

James, i like this. short n sweet, with a whole story to imagine behind it. hope this want a reality though.

much love, gem xxxxxxxx

RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

2 posted 2003-06-10 07:09 AM

i like this kinda rhymes in my head very nice

enjoyed the read

my mind is like a dream sometimes confusing

Ringo

Member Elite

since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

3 posted 2003-06-10 07:40 AM

OUCH!!!!!!
This one hit way too close to home.
Great write.

Day after day I'm more confused,
So I look for the light through the pouring rain...

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2003-06-10 03:24 PM

Thank you gemjop, Red Stone and Ringo for the nice responses...James

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2003-06-10 10:28 PM

(big hugggssssssss) Oh James, this is so very powerfully heartfelt, dearest friend, it is sad to see so many only go for the wealth or lust of someone and not the love itself! (sad sigh) Then I hope the regret can educate the, dearest friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Bombella
Junior Member

since 2003-04-10

Posts 19
Western Australia

6 posted 2003-06-10 11:37 PM

You certainly got me thinking. I can see now that Im going to be left pondering your words for many a day. I enjoyed this imensley. Cherie

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

7 posted 2003-06-10 11:55 PM

Wow, James. You blew me away. So good, my friend.

Patricia

Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

8 posted 2003-06-11 12:09 PM

great write,i hope this wasnt a true life thing for you... then again most poetry is a reflection of life.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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9 posted 2003-06-11 02:26 AM

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