Open Poetry #26 |
Disinhibition |
Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods |
DISINHIBITION When your mind is all And all is lost Then your all Were yours to lose Now you can't And will no more Lose yourself 'Cause you are lost You trigger every button Every on switch you can find But the red light's still flashing In your desperate, staring eyes Revealing Every weakness Every feeling That you hide Are the teardrops As they fall And the shiver In your hands Regardless if their intentions And your doings all were good Your time in institutions Have just left you were you stood You're still out there In the dark Begging for a pound Or a pence In hope that It'll do To buy a ticket Back to sense |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome poem. A lot of people out there feel like this. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
It captures well, I like it. |
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gyiel marlok Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 145OHIO |
broken,sweet write |
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Lethe Junior Member
since 2001-04-10
Posts 36Blackforrest |
Nice one, my friend, enjoyed. Lethe |
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