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Chris-
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0 posted 2003-06-09 03:25 PM


the wings of a moth
beat away at the day
trying to follow
not wanting to stray
but not all of us can keep up
we can't all be heroes
so some of us give up
like the little moth with wings full of dust
who found himself lost
just when he thought he'd found the rest of us
so goodbye to you fallen friend
i never saw you before and i'll never see you again



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the_loner_23
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2003-06-09 03:48 PM


This is so sad. Yet beautifully written.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Chris-
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since 2003-06-09
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2 posted 2003-06-09 03:51 PM


thanks alot
laurie
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since 2003-05-28
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canada, ontario
3 posted 2003-06-09 04:18 PM


it's good, chris. l agree. l've read a lot of what you've posted since you joined, and l noticed that they're all very well written...
thank you for a good read.
laurie.

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