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breaking free |
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Chris- Member
since 2003-06-09
Posts 52 |
machine machine why do you run you have no gasoline so how do you expect to find the sun i will find it on my own with no remembrance of home so keep your gasoline i'm going the rest of it on my own |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is a cool poem Cold hands means a warm heart |
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idleeyes86 Member
since 2003-06-09
Posts 64Somewhere over the rainbow |
surreal but not overly surreal that the reader can't form his own ideas about what you're trying to say. Ambiguous enough that you can think what you want about it really. |
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