Open Poetry #26 |
...LoVe..KnOwS..No..DiStAnCe... |
GhostWriter_6 Member
since 2001-09-03
Posts 237??Amityville?? |
inspiration....your encouraging words that help see me past false limitations is it the anticipation of our consumation or the fact that your a pretty face not within my location its such frustration to see pictures of you and have conversations when we cant have a decent type of male to female relation your man has vacated the premesis and i will always remember this cause your pink slips were sealed with a stolen kiss excuse me miss... but i cant help but throw my self at your mercy common courtesy thats shown by me foremost and firstly i wish i could record these rhymes on cd.. maybe then you would feel me maybe you would love me just as much as any and i would be yours if you would give me hugs a plenty affection is a direction often met at 4 way intersections that can take a different section and teach another life long lesson in other words dont be afraid to come and be close to me.. and find out what real love is supposed to be not fairy tale B.s. cause we all fall under stress common things that life brings ...till were laid to rest: maybe beside your pillow i can stay the night? under the cali moonlight and cuddle tight with you all night or stay up late and watch the movies... not to get you to do me but to spend time with you and learn you truly can i convince you that im just a gentleman and a prince? who loves you now ..not waitng for the past tense.... its like a sixth sense.. your sent seems to sends signals to my body when that somebody is pressed against my body ???are you that somebody??? is this another imagination created figure destined to settle in a mixture like snow globe glitter will the roses forver bloom or are they destined to wilter i can get technical if thats the type of man that keeps you pleased and i can get down on one knee and beg you to forever be with me wedding rings and things sex scenes..or you in some tight jeans all things that my mind creates in vivid dreams beach sand and neverland go hand in hand cause the land and sand you see i can never set foot upon cause my coast is 3 hours different from ya rising sun pictures can only keep me from going insaine without you.. if a picture is worth a thousand words.. then i feel like i almost know all about you |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Wow!! There are so many intense thoughts here and I really enjoyed reading through them one and all!! Great stuff!!! Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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GhostWriter_6 Member
since 2001-09-03
Posts 237??Amityville?? |
thanx for the reply.. im glad someone read it.. its been a while since i have psted here.. just thought i would come back to share some of my new work with ya..... |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
nice to see good writeing |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I enjoyed your style.... Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
yes to this! a beautiful heart felt write, and I truly love your style of writing. your rhyming patterns are awesome! you got my vote! take care amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Very well done. Enjoyed and voted. |
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GhostWriter_6 Member
since 2001-09-03
Posts 237??Amityville?? |
thanx for the feedback.. glad to see ya liked it.. by the way.. what ya voting on????/ |
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FlyingCloud Member
since 2003-04-28
Posts 151A little place inside my head |
Intense! I like the way this was done, but its too long. Always remember to forget |
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SparkleeLipGloss Junior Member
since 2003-05-18
Posts 19Arizona, USA |
Wow.. absolutly amazing! Its written the way my boyfriend writes his poetry.. I haven't heard any of them in a long time.. lol.. I'll need to bug him to let me read them! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Antonio, no distance can halt or prevent love from sailing, like Shakira sings "Lucky we were born far away so we can both make fun of distance!" The way I see it, love should be an adventure and if you just select the first you see, what fun is that! (big hugggsssssss) Here's hoping very soon time draws you to your love, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Antonio, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! what an ending line! |
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