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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-05-17 07:59 AM


Yes, Love

I want you
right now.
At this moment.
If it were only
possible.
Someway.
somehow.
Am I missing you?
Very, very much!
It's a fact,
I miss your touch.
I miss your kiss.
There's nothing
about you that
I don't miss.

On the phone
you sound
so sweet.
What's that?
You can't
be back
from Paris
until next week.

Will I be able
to live with that?
Yes, love.


JamesLee
May17
2003

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Patricia
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Missouri
1 posted 2003-05-17 10:00 AM


Sweet conversation with a love so far away.
Paris?  I hope she'll be back soon.

-Patricia

JP
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since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343
Loomis, CA
2 posted 2003-05-17 12:15 PM


Well done.

Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
Nil Desperandum, Fata viem invenient

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2003-05-17 04:29 PM


Thank you Patrica and JP for the nice responses...James
SimplyGold
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4 posted 2003-05-17 05:25 PM


They say that "distance makes the heart grow fonder". Ah, thus your poem's inspiration. I love it!

SG

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5 posted 2003-05-18 01:08 AM




(giggles in delight) Yep, she's in control, as much as we long to feel loved every second of the day it also tends to discipline us I think, what a sight indeed, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

whiskey
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6 posted 2003-05-18 01:11 AM


A lovely heartfelt piece I can feel the longing for your love to return. Being apart is hard hope she is coming home soon to give you those things you miss.

Julie

[This message has been edited by whiskey (05-18-2003 01:11 AM).]

TwoHeartsOnePen
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since 2002-06-07
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state of determination
7 posted 2003-05-18 01:23 AM


I can barely live with things like this. Enjoyed the expression of love and missing someone..and the patient impatience about seeing them again.

Love is patient, indeed. It endures the distance when it seems we cannot endure it ourselves.

passing shadows
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8 posted 2003-05-18 05:33 AM


here's to hoping the week flies by!
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