Open Poetry #26 |
Yes, Love |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes, Love I want you right now. At this moment. If it were only possible. Someway. somehow. Am I missing you? Very, very much! It's a fact, I miss your touch. I miss your kiss. There's nothing about you that I don't miss. On the phone you sound so sweet. What's that? You can't be back from Paris until next week. Will I be able to live with that? Yes, love. JamesLee May17 2003 |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Sweet conversation with a love so far away. Paris? I hope she'll be back soon. -Patricia |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
Well done. Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Patrica and JP for the nice responses...James |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
They say that "distance makes the heart grow fonder". Ah, thus your poem's inspiration. I love it! SG |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(giggles in delight) Yep, she's in control, as much as we long to feel loved every second of the day it also tends to discipline us I think, what a sight indeed, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
A lovely heartfelt piece I can feel the longing for your love to return. Being apart is hard hope she is coming home soon to give you those things you miss. Julie [This message has been edited by whiskey (05-18-2003 01:11 AM).] |
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TwoHeartsOnePen Member
since 2002-06-07
Posts 60state of determination |
I can barely live with things like this. Enjoyed the expression of love and missing someone..and the patient impatience about seeing them again. Love is patient, indeed. It endures the distance when it seems we cannot endure it ourselves. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
here's to hoping the week flies by! |
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