Open Poetry #26 |
I Love You Like |
ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This what I call a list song but I haven't been able to come up with the right champagne melody for it.... It keeps escaping me.......However, it's meant to be like a Sinatra style tune........Also a repost. I Love You Like I love you like I love memories of sweet peaceful times. Like sunny days and lemonade, secret gifts that Grandma gave, cotton candy and ferris wheels, time alone when dreams seem real. I love you like I love morning dew on fields of grain, dawning sun through window panes, cool clear lakes and boating trips, mother's favourite Sunday dish. I love you like I love the delicate taste of the finest wine. Like the laughing thrill of bumper cars, sleeping out under the stars, singing songs on New Years eve, listening to the roaring sea. I love you like I love walking in a misty rain, the lonely call of a distant train, the warming rush of London Gin, the fire's glow when we're snowed in. I love you like I love the mystic call of a morning Loon. Like thoughts that come on winds that moan, fire flies that chirp and glow, roosters posed on weathervanes, Autumn leaves on country lanes. I love you like I love family days at county fairs, circus clowns with crazy hair, budding trees in early spring, the bubbling talk of mountain streams. Oh I love you like all these things but I have to say I love you most for the quiet way you flow through my heart and veins with a love only God can explain........ I love you The best teachers have the biggest ears |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
oh i love this love list! made me feel all warm n sqidgy. sleeping out under the stars, yes, perfect to do with the one u love. this is a beautiful celebration of how love can mke us feel, the highest and truest form of happiness. much love, gem xxxx |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lots of heart and soul in this one ethome...James |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"listening to the roaring sea. I love you like I love walking in a misty rain, the lonely call of a distant train, the warming rush of London Gin, the fire's glow when we're snowed in." yes! I really like this part it's beautiful, I wish I could hear it sung. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Eric..I do love this! In a way it reminded me of the old Faygo commerical song..remember? I forget the words..but it's a list as well. Excellent and so very much enjoyed. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sheeeeeeer poetry--and I love you, too! Oops-a-daisy! I was so swept away by your vivid professions of love, that I felt you were actually saying them to me! Lucky be she for whom they were written! Love & Eternal Light, EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! just a fantastic song! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Eric...wonderful images, sweetly sung. I heard the melody. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved it |
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