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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2003-06-09 02:21 AM



Images
symphonies of light reflected,
shadows
softly living stained glass chips
combine and,
for an instant,
stop the world.

©2003 by icebox

© Copyright 2003 icebox - All Rights Reserved
GG
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1 posted 2003-06-09 02:31 AM


oh beautiful!
This is so... so.. perfect
precious..
tender..
lovely..
warming..
Happy sigh..
smile..
kind of writing.
LOVE it, thank you!

Always, Alyssa

passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-06-09 04:32 AM


soft smile
Martie
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3 posted 2003-06-09 11:13 AM


icebox

Yes, eyes can do that...the right eyes.

icebox
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in the shadows
4 posted 2003-06-09 02:18 PM


GG ~ I am glad you enjoyed this.  Thank you for your comments.

passing shadows ~ I like to think of you smiling.  

Martie ~ Yes, the right eyes.  *smile*

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with you
5 posted 2003-06-09 10:00 PM


I really like the way this made me remember things I've seen...differently
gyiel marlok
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6 posted 2003-06-09 10:09 PM


an angel sings maybe,huh i don't know
Patricia
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7 posted 2003-06-09 10:49 PM


May I borrow your eyes so that I can see what you see...and while you are at it, throw in a couple of those killer memories too.

Patricia

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8 posted 2003-06-09 10:54 PM


Dang...your good!

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Earth Angel
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9 posted 2003-06-09 10:59 PM


Well, you just stopped my world, Dear Box of Ice!  

Warm hugs,
EA

icebox
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in the shadows
10 posted 2003-06-09 11:41 PM


SEA ~ Well, I hope that smile means it was good to do that.  Thank you for reading and taking time to comment.

gyiel marlok ~ I don't know, what do you see? *smile*

Patricia ~ *smile* Always be careful of that for which you ask; you would not want the dreams that go with them.  Thank you for yor kind comment.

Enchantress ~ ...and you are eloquent! *grin* Thank you for reading and for your comment.

Earth Angel ~ Don't worry EA, it is just like a re-set button.  It will start again. *smile
Thank you for reading my poem and for your comment.

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11 posted 2003-06-10 01:21 AM


...yummy...
icebox
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12 posted 2003-06-10 08:22 PM


Kahlil ~ I am glad you like the taste of these thoughts.  Thank you for your comment.
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