Open Poetry #26 |
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Undiscovered Territories |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
At night, the wagons roll across the dusted plains of my heart, of my soul. Sojourners, pioneers together. We stake our claim to the undiscovered territories, to the pursuit of our heart's homestead. Drifters we...drifting slowly towards the expanded prairies, the high midnight of our ecstasy. How we explore the regions undiscovered, the emotions undisplayed before. Always looking towards the exciting and the new. And so, the wagons roll on across the dusted plains searching for a destination, for a home that was denied us for such a very long time. |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Ivy, I am a sucker for pioneer poetry... And this is an excellent example of what I like. I see the wagons lurching, the lanterns swaying... |
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skyshine![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
This is a very well-done metaphor, Ive Rose. Hope you find what you're looking for. ![]() ~Elizabeth Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A fine piece of metaphorical writing! I always enjoy reading your writing! ![]() Happy homesteading! EA |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) Oh Ivy, this is beautiful, sweet friend, this made me smile as so many of your gorgeous words do, and may you stake claim on the most illustrious territory of all! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nice write/read about history,,, Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Ivy Rose - I see a sense of self in this writing. In between the words I read, but of course I could be way off base. BC |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very good! how I liked this! |
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