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the_loner_23
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-06-09 12:07 PM


What ThunderMage wrote is in Italics
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I stare at your pictures
And I run my fingers
Along the lines of your lips
And I follow it down

My fingers come to your cheek,
Then down to your neck.
Next the shoulders, the arms, the hands,
Then back up to the nose and chin.


My fingers circle the eyes
Then I slowly kiss the picture
And kiss it long
Like I was kissing you again

I feel as though your lips
Are pressed softly against mine.
I feel your arms around me
As our hearts become intertwined.


Even though you are far away
With your pictures here with me
My feelings will never change
As I slowly whisper to your picture
Sweet nothings
Hoping you can hear them from a distance

As I wish I could be in your arms,
I look at your eyes in the pictures.
So full of love and innocence,
Like looking into Heaven and seeing the heart of an angel.


I knew since the day we meet
I couldn't live without you
Even though right now all I have
Is pictures to keep me going

I knew that day I'd found my Heaven,
Right there in your arms.
Never would I let you go,
I'm with you forever.


And I keep repeating to myself
With this new love I have found
I can't live without you
My heaven has been found

Cold hands means a warm heart

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ThunderMage
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1 posted 2003-06-09 12:11 PM


This poem suits us Julie.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

the_loner_23
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2 posted 2003-06-09 03:55 PM


Very true. it does Liam

Cold hands means a warm heart

ThunderMage
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3 posted 2003-06-09 11:14 PM


It sure fits our love, a love that will live eternally.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2003-06-09 11:17 PM




(big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, you two, this is a most sensitive and romantic duet, I can relate well to these feelings as in my dreams I see caricatures of my love who has yet to be revealed! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friends, we all love you both so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Julie and Liam, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you both!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2003-06-09 11:17 PM


Beautiful duet you two!
May your love live forever.
~Smiles & Hugs to you both, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Magnus
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6 posted 2003-06-09 11:25 PM


Beautifully written,  so much said....yet
showing the desire as well as the distance
that separates...  great write....

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