Open Poetry #26 |
I Can't Live Without You (duet with ThunderMage) |
the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
What ThunderMage wrote is in Italics ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I stare at your pictures And I run my fingers Along the lines of your lips And I follow it down My fingers come to your cheek, Then down to your neck. Next the shoulders, the arms, the hands, Then back up to the nose and chin. My fingers circle the eyes Then I slowly kiss the picture And kiss it long Like I was kissing you again I feel as though your lips Are pressed softly against mine. I feel your arms around me As our hearts become intertwined. Even though you are far away With your pictures here with me My feelings will never change As I slowly whisper to your picture Sweet nothings Hoping you can hear them from a distance As I wish I could be in your arms, I look at your eyes in the pictures. So full of love and innocence, Like looking into Heaven and seeing the heart of an angel. I knew since the day we meet I couldn't live without you Even though right now all I have Is pictures to keep me going I knew that day I'd found my Heaven, Right there in your arms. Never would I let you go, I'm with you forever. And I keep repeating to myself With this new love I have found I can't live without you My heaven has been found Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
This poem suits us Julie. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Very true. it does Liam Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
It sure fits our love, a love that will live eternally. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, you two, this is a most sensitive and romantic duet, I can relate well to these feelings as in my dreams I see caricatures of my love who has yet to be revealed! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friends, we all love you both so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Julie and Liam, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you both! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful duet you two! May your love live forever. ~Smiles & Hugs to you both, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Beautifully written, so much said....yet showing the desire as well as the distance that separates... great write.... |
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