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Open Poetry #26

As i'm.....100th originating post

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

0 posted 2003-06-08 01:56 PM

setting here gazing at the
snow angel
vanishing in the snow

saddness is starting to fill
my
eyes with tears

my heart weakens with each
beat
then i realize that our love is

not snow

Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ

[This message has been edited by QjQ (06-08-2003 02:06 PM).]

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-06-08 02:13 PM

Glenn, this made me sad, until I got to this part.....

my heart weakens with each
beat
then i realize that our love is

not snow

....then I felt hope.

Congratulations on your milestone.

Hugs

Ethel

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

2 posted 2003-06-08 02:22 PM

Thanks Ethel,,,

Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2003-06-08 02:27 PM

You just made the snow melt with your romantic words.
Love, Margherita

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2003-06-08 02:30 PM

Your smile would melt the coldest deepest snow!

Congratulations.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

5 posted 2003-06-08 02:32 PM

What a wonderful realization. The snow shall melt, but your love shall remain.

I loved this one, Q. Nicely done!

Patricia

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

6 posted 2003-06-08 02:42 PM

thanks margherita,,nancy,,,patricia..

Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ

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