Open Poetry #26 |
When We Don't Say Goodbye |
vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
We don't say goodbye Do you know How It feels When we say goodbye We don't say goodbye Because It's hurts Inside We don't say goodbye We only say words That is all we can say From heaven to love That were sent to us We don't say goodbye No we don't We only speak the words of love We don't say goodbye It wIll hurt us One by one Our tearsstarts to fall It will hurt us When we call Upon this love We don't say goodbye We both have feelings That we are longing To touch by hands The love was touched by you We don't say goodbye Let the day come Bring us love Because It gonna hurt us If we are leaving So let us not say goodbye |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Goodbye is a word of great feelings, which when said can cause great pain... I never have liked saying goodbyes, though I have on hundreds of occasions. nice write V. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sigh |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Hello has a nicer ring to it. Goodbye always sounds too final, like slamming a door shut. a good write, Vandana |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
It's so hard to say goodbye and it conjures up all sorts of emotions and memories. Nice write! Huggles, Marti |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) Oh Vandana, this is a very heartfelt write, dearest friend, I send heart hugs your way and sure hope you never have to use that word either and "Hello!" will be the word of choice! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Goodbye's are always hard.. no matter what the situation... Good write Vandana. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Good-byes sound so final~ I like to think, until next time, even if it never comes. vandana~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hello, vandana!--I'm not one for goodbyes, either! Warm hugs, EA |
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