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vandana
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0 posted 2003-06-08 01:07 PM



We don't say goodbye
Do you know
How It feels
When we say goodbye
We don't say goodbye
Because It's hurts
Inside
We don't say goodbye

We only say words
That is all we can say
From heaven to love
That were sent to us
We don't say goodbye

No we don't
We only speak the words of love
We don't say goodbye
It wIll hurt us
One by one
Our tearsstarts to fall
It will hurt us
When we call
Upon this love

We don't say goodbye
We both have feelings
That we are longing
To touch by hands
The love was touched by you
We don't say goodbye

Let the day come
Bring us love
Because It gonna hurt us
If we are leaving
So let us not say goodbye



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Magnus
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1 posted 2003-06-08 01:10 PM


Goodbye is a word of great feelings,  which
when said can cause great pain... I never
have liked saying goodbyes,  though I have
on hundreds of occasions.  nice write V.

passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-06-08 01:11 PM


sigh
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3 posted 2003-06-08 01:17 PM


Hello has a nicer ring to it.
Goodbye always sounds too final, like slamming a door shut.

a good write, Vandana  

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4 posted 2003-06-08 06:06 PM


It's so hard to say goodbye and it conjures up all sorts of emotions and memories.

Nice write!  Huggles, Marti

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5 posted 2003-06-08 10:04 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Vandana, this is a very heartfelt write, dearest friend, I send heart hugs your way and sure hope you never have to use that word either and "Hello!" will be the word of choice! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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6 posted 2003-06-08 10:11 PM


Goodbye's are always hard..
no matter what the situation...
Good write Vandana.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

BluesSerenade
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7 posted 2003-06-09 10:28 PM


Good-byes sound so final~
I like to think, until next time, even if it never comes.  

vandana~  

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8 posted 2003-06-09 11:00 PM


Hello, vandana!--I'm not one for goodbyes, either!

Warm hugs,
EA


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