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Open Poetry #26

It Puzzles Me Tonight

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

0 posted 2003-06-08 01:08 AM

The simple steps,
like wind talking
like skin walking
like running ridges in the rain,
each life presents for us its choices
all to sort again;
too many tears we shed
toward too many fears like shadow
monsters fed on bold ideas,
and dreams of love and peace
and happiness.

Am I so blest
to see the true simplicity of life;
or is it just that I have finally broken,
shattered by the elemental
increments of pain and strife,
that day by day
became the sum and product of a life?

©2003 by icebox

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

1 posted 2003-06-08 01:45 AM

goddamn.. my friend I love your writes..thanks for joining and posting

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

2 posted 2003-06-08 02:20 AM

This was an excellent write - into my library it goes.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-06-08 03:58 AM

yeah, what Raph said

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

4 posted 2003-06-08 11:10 AM

Aenimal ~ Thank you for your kind words, and for taking time to share them.

Mysteria ~ I am glad you enjoyed this. Thank you for telling me.

passing shadows ~ *smile* Thank you. I am glad you enjoyed this.

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