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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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As solemn as prayer I plead for her harder hold me down and sink me through the matress through the floor until I hit earth Six feet under I'll begin my ascent and kiss her goodbye as I push my way up through ceilings until I pierce the clouds and am blinded stupid faced in the glory of heaven and silk sheets |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I am not always good at interpreting..not sure what the O stands for...but you have a way of drawing the reader in, and holding them there, even if in sadness. M |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
This is beautiful. I could give if a couple of different meanings just from my perspective, and isn't that what we really want to do with our writing...touch others in some way with which they can identify? But we'll all be waiting for your exact interpretation anyway! I'm keeping this one. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Working on an old idea that orgasms are a kind of death/rebirth, thanks for reading |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Yikes! That's what I felt, and hoped it was about....now it's even better... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
You portray it in such a beautiful passionate perspective . . . this is beautiful xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (06-08-2003 01:22 AM).] |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks Kahlil glad you did grin Thanks Sue |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I've got a story about THAT too...but forum decorum requires that I refrain...  Loved this Raph. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
er you got my email no restrictions there lassie lol |
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JingleBear Member
since 2003-05-08
Posts 76Pennsylvania, USA |
This is a, um... hot poem! But honestly, your writings are always so exciting, and entertaining! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks jinglebear very kind of you to say |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yours are like that?  I need some of whatever you been drinkin' |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh...yes. Thank you, Raph. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Dixie not all the time but I try My pleasure Karilea grins |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
well, in that case, i would like to be reborn everyday. twice. love ur stuff raph, you either have me crying or smiling. and sometimes something in between. muchos love, xxxx |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
*OOOOOH!* |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
WOW!!!!! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Gemma only twice? I can do better..um ..er.. did I just say that? grins lol thanks Nancy and thanks startime [This message has been edited by Aenimal (06-08-2003 04:13 PM).] |
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