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Open Poetry #26

Relax Your Mind

marcel
Senior Member

since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

0 posted 2003-06-07 05:56 PM

Relax Your Mind

Rolling greenery
Black mountains
Purple blossoms
Dandelions fly
Bumble bees splatter
Crystal blue water
Wooden houses
Brick fireplaces
Whirling grey smoke
Into fluffy black clouds
Fluorescent electricity in the distance
Big water drops
Splashing slowly
Windshield wipers
Greedily licking
Explosion of yellow rays
Crayola rainbow
I am a passenger
Traveling to infinity
As the valley of time stands still
And somewhere, far away
The creator smiles.

Marcel

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2003-06-07 06:05 PM

So many clear visuals in this.
Nicely done, and sweetly soothing.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-06-08 04:52 AM

wonderfully soothing

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