Open Poetry #26 |
Relax Your Mind |
marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
Relax Your Mind Rolling greenery Black mountains Purple blossoms Dandelions fly Bumble bees splatter Crystal blue water Wooden houses Brick fireplaces Whirling grey smoke Into fluffy black clouds Fluorescent electricity in the distance Big water drops Splashing slowly Windshield wipers Greedily licking Explosion of yellow rays Crayola rainbow I am a passenger Traveling to infinity As the valley of time stands still And somewhere, far away The creator smiles. Marcel |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
So many clear visuals in this. Nicely done, and sweetly soothing. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderfully soothing |
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