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Mine Alone.........(finished)
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Mine Alone.........(finished) |
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Joe Houck Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 324california 
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Mine Alone My hand weaves words Into this heated blanket that I’ve sewn Sitting pen in grasp Until I laps into a coma Crafting syllables in succession Showing thoughts of mine alone I feel it growing Pen is flowing Never knowing Where my mind will take me No fear of where my thoughts end up My thoughts never forsake me My thoughts turn into views My views into my creed Never ending Ever mending Causing bloodless hearts to bleed A dash lunacy sets my head spinning Merging meditation into substance from my penning Clap my hands the bulb lights up Inspiration seeping fills the cup My mind now channeled in transparent cables Guided to the tune of Aesop Fables Playing his melody on the skipping turn tables Of my buoyant brain Staying afloat The grimes moat So all can ascertain That nothing can be something And beautiful can be plain. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
Merging meditation into substance from my penning liked these lines,,good write.... Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
Gorgeous. I loved this write. It encapsulates everything that I believe is poetry and the poet. You are an amazing writer, let me just say. Can't wait to read more of your work. Junior Member, yv |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes! good write! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Hey... I have been waiting for the end result... Was worth it! Applause...TD |
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Joe Houck Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 324california |
Thank you everyone. This was a fun poem it write. I'm glad you liked it. =) Joe |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
I like the pace of this, like writing in a journal and letting it flow. Great poem! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your ending says it all. I mean we're not talking brain surgery! Neat poem Joe~ Thanks. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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