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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2003-06-07 12:26 PM



Tangy

that’s the taste of you,

and I like it

very much.

So would you please
stick around
long enough for me
to decide if you are

sweetest orange zest

or bitter lemon

for my soul?

© Copyright 2003 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
QjQ
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1 posted 2003-06-07 12:29 PM


very good write,,  

Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ

Selina
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2 posted 2003-06-07 12:34 PM


This poem is wonderful!  It's fun, exciting, passionate...
It envokes such wonderful feelings of a new, undiscovered relationship

"If it's true you never loved me, there's no deception as you cry..." --SDaws

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3 posted 2003-06-07 12:37 PM


thank you Q!
and
Selina? THANKS and WELCOME to Passions!

BluesSerenade
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4 posted 2003-06-07 12:44 PM


Yes Kacy, I liked this very much!
Selina
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5 posted 2003-06-07 12:44 PM


Thank you!     I look forward to getting to know everyone and having fun reading and writing poetry

"If it's true you never loved me, there's no deception as you cry..." --SDaws

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6 posted 2003-06-07 12:50 PM


Thanks Bluesygal!
Selina, jump in with a post, the water temp is fine right now.

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7 posted 2003-06-07 01:45 PM


thats the chance you take when u want more than vanilla
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8 posted 2003-06-07 01:51 PM


LOL, you've got that right, inked one
thanks for spending a moment

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9 posted 2003-06-07 02:06 PM


neat
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