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Open Poetry #26

Tangy

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2003-06-07 12:26 PM

Tangy

that’s the taste of you,

and I like it

very much.

So would you please
stick around
long enough for me
to decide if you are

sweetest orange zest

or bitter lemon

for my soul?

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-06-07 12:29 PM

very good write,,

Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ

Selina
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since 2003-06-07

Posts 62
Philadelphia, PA, USA

2 posted 2003-06-07 12:34 PM

This poem is wonderful! It's fun, exciting, passionate...
It envokes such wonderful feelings of a new, undiscovered relationship

"If it's true you never loved me, there's no deception as you cry..." --SDaws

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2003-06-07 12:37 PM

thank you Q!
and
Selina? THANKS and WELCOME to Passions!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2003-06-07 12:44 PM

Yes Kacy, I liked this very much!

Selina
Member

since 2003-06-07

Posts 62
Philadelphia, PA, USA

5 posted 2003-06-07 12:44 PM

Thank you!

I look forward to getting to know everyone and having fun reading and writing poetry

"If it's true you never loved me, there's no deception as you cry..." --SDaws

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2003-06-07 12:50 PM

Thanks Bluesygal!
Selina, jump in with a post, the water temp is fine right now.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

7 posted 2003-06-07 01:45 PM

thats the chance you take when u want more than vanilla

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

8 posted 2003-06-07 01:51 PM

LOL, you've got that right, inked one

thanks for spending a moment

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

9 posted 2003-06-07 02:06 PM

neat

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