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Ishmael
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0 posted 2003-06-07 08:54 AM



Some thoughts on cheap hotels and tight trousers


The Worm awoke in a room
that looked like King Elvis Himself
had just had his wedding reception in it
and watched blearily
while Dogboy kicked around in the rubble
as if looking for a misplaced bridesmaid
(Iggy was discovering that peach taffeta
didn’t taste at all, like peach, )

[This message has been edited by Ishmael (06-07-2003 11:03 AM).]

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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2003-06-07 09:09 AM


methinks "Iggy" would be me bud...

but then? even I never know..


Poe_Pot_Pie
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2 posted 2003-06-07 11:14 AM


Interesting. I am not sure I get it, but it is quite interesting.
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3 posted 2003-06-07 11:57 AM


So, guess this means Iggy doesn't wear rose colored specs?
LOL, peach taffeta...yuck.

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4 posted 2003-06-07 12:00 PM


well then any friend of Serenity's is sure a friend of mine LOL.  I felt sorry for Iggy this time actually.
Aenimal
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5 posted 2003-06-07 05:07 PM


Love this entire series MPD at its finest
littlewing
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6 posted 2003-06-08 03:23 AM


Ish

I just wrote about something similar

hmm dogboy sounds familiar . . .

beneath the surface here
xxoo

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7 posted 2003-06-10 01:22 AM


waking
worry
shaving tongue

serenity blaze
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8 posted 2003-06-10 07:12 AM


This is my favorite thus far too.


But then? NATURALLY it would be!

Hugs you.

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9 posted 2003-06-10 07:39 AM


This is really strange... I love it. Now, I have to go back and look at the other stuff you've written here.

Day after day I'm more confused,
So I look for the light through the pouring rain...

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